Wmayer's artwork

On this art club layout, the use of school colors gives a nice touch to the overall feel of the artwork. The bus integrates the trips that are taken and the corn highlights the corn booth. I think the placement of the corn is pretty good, with the slight tilt that helps to illustrate the butter melting off of it. The red butter might need a bit of work as well as maybe integrating either another picture, possibly, or maybe making the bus a little bit bigger to cover some of the negative space that seems a little prominent.

The text inside the box could probably use a little either cutting or separation to highlight the key points. Overall, I like the colors and elements used, but I feel this piece leaves me wanting a little bit more.